Post by Rayne on Mar 6, 2006 2:26:02 GMT -5
Name: Rayne.
Breed: Mainly mustang, mixed in with a few others.
Colour: Dun.
Gender: Mare.
Age: 5 yrs.
Alliance: Dark.
Personality: Rayne, to put it simple, is a manipulative, deceiving wench. Chances are, she's only being nice and acting to be your friend to get something she wants - any other horse's problems or desires usually have no factor in her mind. Rayne also has a problem with leadership - she can backtalk and be a smart-ass like nobody's business - and tends to only follow those worthy it in her mind.
Sample (Which has no real point whatsoever!): Rayne couldn't help but give a slight scoff after the stallion had finished his incessant rambling about who he is was, his rank and sheesh, Rayne didn't know but there was probably something about his favorite time of day in there as well. She'd mentally wandered away after he had started to talk.
I'm going to save you some time, 'Casanova'", she remarked, her tail flicking back and forth to shoo away some pests as she talked. "I'm not interested in playing happy families with you and your band of dimwit mares. I'd rather lose a fight to a foal than risk utter humiliation with you. So next time you start your speech with someone, you might want to...oh, what's the word...?"
Rayne started to walk away now, brushing past the stallion in a way that, if she hasn't just insulted him, would have come off as slightly flirtatious. As she finally passed him and was just coming into out-of-hearing distance, she called back: "Grow a brain."
Apples are the best fruit ever! *apple*
Also...umm, I haven't played darks in awhile [never been quite good at it, according to others] but I wanted to give it a shot..Is Rayne being dark enough or should I change some things to make her more, well, 'dark'?
Breed: Mainly mustang, mixed in with a few others.
Colour: Dun.
Gender: Mare.
Age: 5 yrs.
Alliance: Dark.
Personality: Rayne, to put it simple, is a manipulative, deceiving wench. Chances are, she's only being nice and acting to be your friend to get something she wants - any other horse's problems or desires usually have no factor in her mind. Rayne also has a problem with leadership - she can backtalk and be a smart-ass like nobody's business - and tends to only follow those worthy it in her mind.
Sample (Which has no real point whatsoever!): Rayne couldn't help but give a slight scoff after the stallion had finished his incessant rambling about who he is was, his rank and sheesh, Rayne didn't know but there was probably something about his favorite time of day in there as well. She'd mentally wandered away after he had started to talk.
I'm going to save you some time, 'Casanova'", she remarked, her tail flicking back and forth to shoo away some pests as she talked. "I'm not interested in playing happy families with you and your band of dimwit mares. I'd rather lose a fight to a foal than risk utter humiliation with you. So next time you start your speech with someone, you might want to...oh, what's the word...?"
Rayne started to walk away now, brushing past the stallion in a way that, if she hasn't just insulted him, would have come off as slightly flirtatious. As she finally passed him and was just coming into out-of-hearing distance, she called back: "Grow a brain."
Apples are the best fruit ever! *apple*
Also...umm, I haven't played darks in awhile [never been quite good at it, according to others] but I wanted to give it a shot..Is Rayne being dark enough or should I change some things to make her more, well, 'dark'?